#cosmicradio2024
「Cosmic Radio 2024 Submission」
a goofy song about trying to write a song about commuting
Composition -
0mni
Vocals -
SOLARIA from Synth V
Lyricists -
0mni
M1n3c4rt
Hawkyrious
CyanAqua
Lyrics -
Open a brand new page and maybe,
I'll write about something relatable
What about forgetting-
Actually nevermind that's really stupid
How about someones commute
I'm sure that has not been done before,
I'm just gonna check to see what others have done
Every word I write and I think are they my own
or am I stealing off people better than me and making it worse
"The buses and trains loop around again and again"
God that sucks so bad, lets give it another try
Open a brand new page again,
and maybe this time I'll write something that's good and not like the complete trash I wrote before-
I think I have an idea:
"the train departs without me again, the bus drives straight past me- I'm gonna be so late"
Maybe something like- no!
I'll just try this maybe- no!
Can I just write something good?
Every word I write and I think they are my own
I am not stealing off people better than me and making it worse
This song is driving me absolutely crazy,
Why cant I just write well?
Maybe no one will be able to tell if I just delete it!
Some of the words I've wrote are not mine, but that's fine
Next time I promise that I will do it right!
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